Kia ora
This week we had to writie a recount or a poem to show Autumn we had to go outside and draw something to do with Autumn and writie a recount or poem on it here is my work.
Kia ora Honey my name is Ruby and I go to Grey Main School. I'm in a year 5/6 classroom. I think your poem is great, but I think you should put a picture of a leaf or maybe make your background a leaf. I like the way you added colour to your writing in the word autumn and your background is a nice colour. The funnriest bit about the poem is that you said the leaf is wrinkly like you nana. from Ruby
Kia ora Honey my name is Ruby and I go to Grey Main School. I'm in a year 5/6 classroom. I think your poem is great, but I think you should put a picture of a leaf or maybe make your background a leaf. I like the way you added colour to your writing in the word autumn and your background is a nice colour. The funnriest bit about the poem is that you said the leaf is wrinkly like you nana. from Ruby
ReplyDeletehi ruby coppen's this is a good publish:)
DeleteHi Honey
ReplyDeleteits mummy :)
i love your poem.
it is super awesome like you are :)
love you
xox